he smells of home
and of sea spray and salt,
and of wood and pain and empty rum bottles
but mostly
just home
he said he would be back
"before you forget me"
he teased
(i could never forget a part of me)
he jumped out and swam back
to hug me again
so i could breathe him in
and remember
it has been a while
a long, long while
since i waved goodbye from the docks
but that's okay
i'm still waiting for my home to return
//
above pictures were taken by le moi in Lake District, this gorgeous place in UK.
(isn't it beautiful though??)
p.s.: also, i have been reading lots of pirate and captain hook-like stories lately, hence the source of inspiration for this post *grins* thanks for reading, you lovely people ♥♥
UGHAWLIHALWIEHFLAIWEf. STOP HURTING ME.
ReplyDeletethis is so good my heart is dying. ♥
xx
is it bad that i love how your heart is dying in a non-sadistic way??
Delete(okay that sounded weird and funky, but hahaha so glad you like it)
thank you kindly, addy dear<3<3
*dies of cuteness and love and tears yey bye*
ReplyDeleteeeek cahhllayy<3
Deletethank you sweet girl *hugs*
So good... I can feel the longing. It's messing with my mind and my heart! :P ♥♥♥
ReplyDeletexoxo Morning
hahaha, morning, thank yewws<3<3
Deleteso glad you enjoyed it! xx
This. THIS. this. oh wow <3 this is truly beautiful.
ReplyDelete*blushes*
Deletethank you SO for this comment <3 it really made my day!
I love this so much! Especially how he is 'home'. And the photos are gorgeous. Your writing is always a pleasure to read. :)
ReplyDeletei know! i enjoy the idea of having someone (instead of a physical place) as home. a place that is safe, comfortable, and just...home (:
Deleteugh, you are too kind jo *blushes* <3<3 thanks a million for leaving this sweet comment!
This is so beautiful, the writing, the pictures, just ah.
ReplyDelete~Noor
*grinsss*
Deletethank you thank you, noor<3<3
How can someone be such a beautiful writer? :) I really enjoyed this, Elisabeth.
ReplyDelete~ Sanjana
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dawww thank you so much sanjana<3<3
DeleteThis is such a beautiful poem. What an excellent writer you are!
ReplyDeleteMuch love,
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pshaw, you're too kind, acacia (you have a beautiullll name)
Delete<3
the picture of the yellow flower is gorgeous!
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful elisabeth. i can imagine it happening :)
i love that place where i took that photo ugh <3
Deletenymishaaa, thank you so much (: i really want it to happen; it's such a sweet love story (i'm very much in love with the characters hahahah) <3<3
Ah. This hurts. My home is leaving in three weeks, and he'll be missed. </3
ReplyDeleteaw, i'm sorry; i know how that feels.
Deletei love that you could relate to it, though <3<3 it makes it so much more personal and lovely xx
I like how when I read your writing it transports me to a different place and time. And I love how I feel every words you've typed down.
ReplyDeleteThis was beautiful. Both the photos and the poetry.
-T. x
hUGS<3
Deletethank you so much tane. your comment means so much xxx