a raw collection of words from my heart

17.4.15

the start of something new

it's fiction time (vi.)

his eyes were cold. cold, flashing, and dangerous.

but she found something akin to pain in them, the first sign of human-ness she had seen in him. strangely, that gave her hope. hope for what? you may ask. she didn't know either. all she knew was his eyes were very terrible, and very beautiful.

so, in such a manner, they continued along the road, with her sneaking looks at his unchanging face, and him stonily glaring ahead. silence never bothered her, so she was quite comfortable with the arrangement. from time to time, she would talk, he wouldn't respond, and she would continue the one-sided conversation. once, when she was discussing with, well, herself on something particularly silly, just to pass time, she thought she caught an amused flicker of eyes towards her direction.

she didn't know why, but she felt immensely happy.


all images from tumblr


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i'm slowly beating writer's block guys!
thanks tons for the suggestions y'all gave in the previous post;
they were so very helpful 

also, i just have to add that this fiction was inspired by:
the lovely Adelaide Thompson over at Down by the Willows.
her writing is stunning. go on, check her out right now!

P.S.: if you have instagram, go on and follow me @elisab.ethf because i've been on there more recently!

xxx

20 comments

  1. Oh god I love this tiny story. To be honest, I am super attracted to that boy right now haha
    Amazing :)

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    1. (i know right!) hahah. i like him too xxx.

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  2. This is ABSOLUTELY beautiful. I love the way you describe people :)

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  3. Woah....this was just so awesome. I loved it <3 And your design is the BEST.

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    1. aw, thank you! i'm really bad at designing, so i'm really glad i found one online that suited me <3 xxx.

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  4. THERE ARE LOTS OF TEARS.

    This was so beautiful, and it describes the human, honest emotions so well. ♥♥♥

    xoxo

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    1. STOP IT GIRL, you're making me blush! hahah, thank you so much xxx.

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  5. Wow! I'm not dating, but I have felt the way this girl has before, when I was with a guy friend of mine. And the new design is gorgeous, m'dear.

    xoxo Morning

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  6. You write with power and beauty.

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    1. you're so sweet, tane. thank you xxx.

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  7. I really like the new design, but i realllllllly liked the old one... :( Im SO sorry if this comes across as mean, I just wanted to say.
    WRiting is eautifull as always

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    1. that's fine! thank you so much, anon xxx.

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  8. I AM SO DEAD. ARE YOU EVEN KIDDING ME. HOW DID I NOT FIND THIS. Best piece of writing I've found since I got back. Oh man. <3 <3 <3

    p.s. can you email me at candencedeclan@gmail.com? I have a few things I need to ask you. Thanks,
    Cally.

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    1. haha, you're SUCH a dear. thank you.
      alrighty! i'll email you in a moment xxx.

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  9. Oh I love this!! I just discovered your blog via evelyn at the raven + the writer's bio and I'm loving it!! You're a wonderful writer!!

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    1. EEEESH <3.
      hello there nina dear! you're too sweet for words. so glad you hopped along this journey! xx

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